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a memory lost, a war to begin,
lost in translation through thick and thin.

enemies made are friends in time,
yet you veil every entrance with social slime




may love be a game and hate be the tool,
as you play every entrant in this life for fools.

yet through irony, lust, loss and time,
this twisted sick grouping has cut its last line




a poetic end, through tragic means,
as two trees in your forrest discard their leaves.

follow the jones family, and soon you'll find,
everything you held dear leaving you far behind..
For all of you out there who claim to have been sedated because of a guy (1), claimed to have forgotten who that guy(1) is, then claimed to have fallen in love with another guy(2), then gone to las vegas and boned a random dude(3) on a first-come-first-serve basis, then arrived in london, claimed to love the vegas guy(3), then given head to the first guy(1), then met the other guy (2) and say you hated the guy you boned in vegas(3), and try to sabotage his friendship with the first guy(1),

we salute you.

Joint message of solidarity from * b33lz3bub & *hakfest

Writing by *b33lz3bub | Imagery by * hakfest
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:iconb33lz3sgirl:
b33lz3sGirl Featured By Owner May 29, 2006   Writer
then given head to the first guy(1),


so honey want to fill me in on this

or should i assume?
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Nicoh Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2006
Nice jewfro middle finger.
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:iconb33lz3bub:
b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2006  Professional General Artist
:lol:
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semilome Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
sorry my english is not good enough to read the complete peace... but the comment to is is a reaaly big mess!!!
so many guys!!!! good look to the next guy you meet......
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:iconbratchny:
bratchny Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2005
lmafo wtf's this
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:iconpassenger-nq:
passenger-nq Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
haha, friendship kicks the biachtes' asses :#1:

who's the jones family?
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:iconb33lz3bub:
b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005  Professional General Artist
the jones family goes back to a saying: 'the jones family is doing this, therefor we must' (often recalled when talking with sales teams about how to pitch items to customers etc)
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passenger-nq Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005
oh, makes sense now. was wondering if there was something specific hiding behind this name :sherlock:
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:iconb33lz3bub:
b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005  Professional General Artist
;)
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DanLuVisiArt Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2005  Professional Digital Artist
=/ sorry mike, we're friends and all, but this just isn't you..

this is sad =/

kinda lowers my respect for both of you, no matter what the situation is, on either's part.
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b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2005  Professional General Artist
it had to be done. subtle enough so that it got the message across to who needed to read it. im not going to explain myself here. just know it was, for me, and the state im in, the right thing to do. you'll probably not believe me. but im not here to destroy friendships.

i'll talk to you on aim sometime.
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darkvenom Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2005
oo niiiice poem dude, and an excellent image to go with :horns: the poem, although seeming quite..ummm (forgets the word he's looking for) (damnit) ...although seeming quite abstract? the emotion still powers through, and certain words are taken with great strengths. i also like the ending very much i do :nod: :horns:
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:iconwebrodent:
webrodent Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2005
i like the flow of it :thumbsup:
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wicked-eve Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005
i didn't like the double usage of the word time..yet somehow it seemed to fit.
overall it's a solid piece of writing..imo.
emotional..which again imo, is always a good thing with poetry.

nicely written dudes. :heart:

ps. the SS is perfect. :>
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:iconb33lz3bub:
b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2005  Professional General Artist
:heart::cuddle: why thank you eve :smooch:
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ttearz Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005  Professional Digital Artist
wow. . . hun. . .
I feel loved. .
randomly rummaging through my little deviants and found a lovely middle finger :aww:. . . very lovely lol. .


oh my the way. .
I want your baby. . :crazy:
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:iconb33lz3bub:
b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005  Professional General Artist
:blush: :cuddle:
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:iconttearz:
ttearz Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005  Professional Digital Artist
hehehe. .
you so sweet. .

:glomp:
hehehe


:heart:
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dholms Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol.
i have no idea what you're talking about brotha,...
but i get the feeling somebody got fucked!
in more ways than one!
so i'm with ya man!
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b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005  Professional General Artist
:lmao: spoken like a legend


// btw ma main sketchwhore brother, expect many an upload of lineage from me in the next couple days :salute:
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geckokid Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005  Professional General Artist
:lick:
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musicinmyhead Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005
Well, the only thing I find more retarded than this poem, is the fact that you seem to think it's the fault of someone other than you or your friend for losing that friendship. Nobody made you two split up as friends, both of you made a conscious decision to stop liking each other for whatever reasons. Friends don't let others "sabotage" their friendship, they don't try and place blame on anyone but themselves for being stupid about the simplest of things.

Whether or not "those of you" as you say in the description hate you or your friend makes no difference in the friendship you had at one time. It seems that both of you were too stupid to be friends in the first place, and probably deserved what you had coming to you.
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b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005  Professional General Artist
if i were to say anything here, i fear id start an argument. and id probably find it humorous if an argument were started over this, of all things. what james said there was true. im not going to build on that. i think the matter at hand as finally found its end. glad you found the poem retarded. heh. i wouldve figured as much :)
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JamesBardolph Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005
We didn't. We nearly did.

Although at one point someone attempted to turn him against me before we even considered each other friends, rather than 'someone i know of'.

And things are not always what they seem, especially in this case.

Havent seen you on IRC for over a year now, BTW. Hope things went your way with that stuff (if you even remember)
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fangedfem Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005
I dont get it but that doesnt stop me from enjoying your intense expression of words here :nod:

:hug:
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:iconb33lz3bub:
b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005  Professional General Artist
:hug: thank you :cuddle:
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eclipsic Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005
I thought I knew you, not well, but, at least a bit, Mike.

But obviously I didn't...
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b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005  Professional General Artist
if you find this piece depressing, or at least, have now come to what you believe to be the realisation that i am something you didnt believe to be. maybe i am. maybe im not. or maybe, the fact is, there are others around you, who you truly dont know that much about, and this was merely me leaving them behind. as i should have done a long time ago.

of course. maybe ignorance is bliss. whatever. believe what you want to believe, friend. the things in my head have no grudge with you
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eclipsic Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005
:|

Jesus, Mike.
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xxdonkeyfishxx Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005
thats beautiful dude
im usually not into poetry that rhymes but i like it
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mechangel2002 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005  Professional Traditional Artist
"You KNOW me???" :o

heh... :hug:
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toofargonetobesane Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005
i get that fork in the road feeling when i read it. i dig it dude
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b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005  Professional General Artist
danke :bow:
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mailorderchild Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005
somehow strangely reminds me of fear and loathing in las vegas... Hmmmm.. but yeah :D
i really can't complain about the lines written. It's well done :D
"yet you veil every entrance with social slime" I adore that line.. Social Slime more like it, good stuff very deep.
What was your inspiration in writing this..
someone has boney knuckles.. :nod:

:clap:
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b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005  Professional General Artist
:giggle: good ole boney knuckles eh :slow: :nod:
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:iconmailorderchild:
mailorderchild Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005
he's gotta be popular with the ladies.... fingers like that
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:iconjamesbardolph:
JamesBardolph Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005
I punch people a lot :giggle:
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:iconmailorderchild:
mailorderchild Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005
LOL just don't punch me.... i might be at one of the devmeets in the UK soon.. i'm moving there in HOPEFULLY APRIL MAAHAHAHAHA.. i always sat around all envy like at your guys's devmeets and such now i can fucking go i'm just god damned spiffy like that.
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Wow, extremely visual. Very nice.
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Walfke Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005
:salute:
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:iconb33lz3bub:
b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005  Professional General Artist
:salute:
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LordDrow Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005
Just as random as ever Mike
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TheReverend666 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005
Very, very cool
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:iconformor:
Formor Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005
:salute:
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:iconb33lz3bub:
b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005  Professional General Artist
:salute:
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Hades999 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005
hah, fancy seeing ^you^ here.. funny, anyway...

I really like the writing and picture combination, all I really have to say is 'amen to that.' ..Silly people...

The "social slime" comment struck me as pretty amusing.

Hope your trip is goin well, assuming you're still on it and all
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b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005  Professional General Artist
hehe thanks, glad you liked the social slime remark .// and yeah im back in perth now
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jasapunk Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005
MIKE I LOVE YOUR SENSE OF HUMOR, BUT IF YOU'RE GOING TO TALK SHIT ON ME.....ha ha just kidding
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:iconb33lz3bub:
b33lz3bub Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005  Professional General Artist
:giggle:
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:iconjasapunk:
jasapunk Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005
well, i am ever paranoid...just kidding
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